Broke Her World

by Samantha   Dec 22, 2005


Green eyes stare in the window
Watching you with that other girl
It was on that very stormy night
You came and broke her world.

You asked to meet her like you always did
At the big oak tree at eight
But when she arrived, you weren't there
She just thought that you were late.

Time went by as it tends to do
But still you did not show
You hid your lies and secrets
And soon of them she would know.

She walked to your house
Hoping nothing was wrong
She loved you so very much
And you were where her heart belonged.

The lights were on
Yet, you didn't come to the door
She looked into the window
And saw something she couldn't ignore.

You were sitting there with a pretty blond
There was a sparkle in your eye
Her heart beat faster
But she shouldn't be surprised.

She should have known,
The all told her
That you didn't really
Want to hold her.

But she loved you so
She didn't care
You two could be together
Even if you weren't ever really there.

She left that day
With a hole in her heart
She never thought the day would come
For you and her to be apart.

But you shattered her into pieces
You stole everything she believed in
But now that you are gone,
Hopefully she will see
Her new life can now begin.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jerry Scott

    Great work incredible expression in your selection of words.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    This was really good, if it's true im sorry that must have hard and also kind of awkward watching your boyfriend through a window with another girl....but it was a cool story and you use really great imagery and vocab and for the most part your rhymes were good sometimes you use words that sound like they rhyme but don't really rhyme but it dosn't really matter because they still sound good i didn't like this stanza though

    She should have known,
    The all told her
    That you didn't really
    Want to hold her.

    didn't flow and didn't really rhyme, technically it rhymed, but i don't really think it sounds very nice and then the last stanza threw the flow off too and i always think the ending stanza should be strong at least and i don't think you ended this as well as you could have at all but still a 5/5 great work