One sweet kiss

I read it like I promised, and I'm glad I did.
I loved it! It was...amazing!!!
Keep it up.
*Drew

Wow, I really liked it. That wasn't what I was expecting judging by the title. I like the analogy between the kiss and committing suicide. I usually don't like these poems because they're cliche and blah, but yours wasn't at all. Keep up the awesome work!

Heh heh, this one felt really unique to me, I dunno how, but I guess it did for a reason. ;)

That is really good, the rhymes work so well and don't interrupt the flow of the whole thing... it's a really well-written strong, powerful poem, well done :) stabbylou x

Fukin awsome! flows, an i love short an powerfull