Awww. so sad, but i'm glad it ended well n e way. at least u got a gd poem outta the destress.

Great job its was sad but it turned out good in the end keeep it up Xox Laura Marie Xox 5/5

Great poem, written very well. glad it turned out ok at the end

Oh my gosh that was so cute! i freakin love it! you have some major major talent! you are so going on my favorites!
love:heather

If i sent a complain im so sorry
i pressed it on accedint.
im so sorry if they did send u a complain

Wooooow hunny thatw as usch a great peice of writing. full of emotion and feeling. i love the rhyme pattern as it fits well te words just flow like it comes from deep with in the heart.the whole poem flows liek a good poem should i really felt like i was in the poem to. such a greta peice of work. i loved it keep the great work up loves ya always crimson-pain xxxxxxxx

WOW!! very good lots of emotion. I like how u layed it out nice. A poem from the heart never goes wrong ^_^ keep it up!!

Awww..that was very good!!..nice work!!.you have talent!!

Its sweet my friend im happy for ya..

i loved ur rhyming nd keep it up!

Awww..thats so sweet I loved the emotion and the flow of it hun. keep up the amazing work and u will go far.

Julie

Hey great poem!!!
Love Tiffany Heather

Aaww cute poem, I really like it nice chattin wit ya too... 5/5

This is really really well written. some nice rhymes and it has really good rhythem...so it flows really well. one of the best i'v read recently. now will you please check out my poem "Desperate Girl;Why Do You Stare?" ???
thankyou

X lonelynow X

~Great poems. Doesn't it feel a lot better when you write your feelings on paper. Very well Written. Click on my name, and read some of my poems. Thanks~
casey

OMGosh! That is so sweet! I loved this poem! Feelingz of wishing and hoping and praying for that one person to notice you (in ur case e-mail back) it's just fantastic the way you put it into words! I LOVED IT! 5/5!

(Perhaps unfortunately) I can say I know exactly how you feel. I have never yet been able to put that particular emotion into words, but you have done it for me. Thank you for writitng such a beautiful, true poem, I can't express how it feels to know that someone else has experinced a similar thing.
All the best wishes in the world,
*VioletRaven*

Awww!!!! so adorable..
i love it...and u:P
i will keep writing..and i love ur comments..they make me smile=)
love,
>torn -x.x.x-

Geat emotion. you've got some real talent. keep it up!!!

I cannot begin to say how much your comments mean to me. thank you all so much.
and i think everyone should check out amelia's poem (shes only got one)....it is amazing....*oh so sarcastic*.

vito, handle the trash.

love you guys so so much...
xxDhavalxx

Sweet