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  • 18 years ago

    by aimee

    I Love it, best wishes

  • 18 years ago

    by ~Nicole Rae~

    WOW!!....this poem is awesome!!!...You are such a good writer!!..This poem rly touched me!!..It was great!!!!! =)

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Another Chemical Romance

    Awsome poem i loved it its filled with such emotion 5/5
    xoxoxoxox

  • 18 years ago

    by obsessedgurl

    Awwww i m almost cryin' over here. Your poem was sad but heartfelt. I really liked it. I'm so sorrry that had to happen.

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsey

    OMG! WOW!!!! First, you started this poem off so strong I absolutley loved it..and you ended it terrificly! You have got so much talent and I wish you the best of luck with your writing!!!

    P.S. thank you for your sweet comment on my "When the Clock strikes Midnight" poem..it wasn' true but I thank you so much for you concern!

  • 18 years ago

    by coupon can

    I loved this poem...i like how u used x-mas in it and everything...i really like it...keep writing...laters

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittney

    Wow that was a great poem....at least every thing turned out ok in the end....

  • 18 years ago

    by Chantelle

    Great poem once again. im amazed it can be so long and every word keeps you more and more interested each time. Well done

  • 18 years ago

    by Erica

    Awww that was a sad poem but very good!

  • 18 years ago

    by Sayuri

    That's was awesome and soo sweet.

  • 18 years ago

    by Stumbling Shaman

    Wow man, brilliantly written. What else can I say? 5/5.
    Matt

  • 18 years ago

    by meg

    Aww its soo cute i love it♥

  • 18 years ago

    by Ariana

    Nice work, the rhyming is quite good and continous, and it doesn't sound forced either, adding to the piece. Well done :)

  • 18 years ago

    by LuVlYlUfFlY

    Great you should keep up the hard work it is wonderful

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Long..lol but verry well done. excellent work.

    Melissa

  • 17 years ago

    by Wallace

    Amazing poem, you truly have a talent, excellent work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

    Best Wishes
    Wallace

  • 16 years ago

    by katie

    This was really good, i liked it alot.

  • 16 years ago

    by Katelyn

    Pretty good! i liked ur usage of ur vocabulary. great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Jo Anna EL

    Amazingly beautiful a work of art left me in awe

  • 16 years ago

    by Amanda Lynn

    Great poem.. it is so full of emotion and when i read it i could almost place my self in your position with all the details i felt like i was there....but ne way great poem.