Aww this poem is so sweet. You must really like this girl. It's greatly written and well thought out. Keep up the good work.

5/5

~Mallory

Wow!! was my first word. You really in love and thats awsome! Keep it up i'll defently add u to my favorits list. ^_^

5/5

DevilsAngel

Great poem ( : keep it up

OMG, I'm so sorry........this is b-utiful..I love it 5/5

Im sry it was butifully written plz keep ya head up....

Wow excellant youve got talent it flowed well and was so beutiful weel done

I would say that I truly hate this poem, but that would be a lie and I think you know it. So if I actually have to be honest...well...I ABSO-TIVELY, POSI-LUTELY, YOU WOULD NOT BELIEVE HOW MUCH LOVE THIS POEM! I'd tell you how much, but that would take too much time. It's so heart felt and enchanting. It's stupendously wonderful.

Hey great poem yet again...
keep writing and i will keep reading

I love you

You got talent guy!!!!!!! 5/5 =)

Hey great poem, but i agree with Serena about punctuation, it really does improve the poem all round. it betters the flow and quality of the poem and also help hold the action of the reader and more of what you are saying sinks in. without it you read the lines without stopping and don't really focus on the meaning and emotions of the poem.
Good job though and thanks for the comment!
Mwah

Another magnificent poem, but i agree with Serena and ShadowedPhoenix about the punctuation . But I was able to understand it . I must say your vocabulary skill's are wonderful . I don't think I have read the dictionary as much before as I have read it to read your poems . Please don't let the punctuation thing discourage you, because all poets make some mistake's . At least I know I do . Keep up the excellent work and thank you for the comment .

Letty

Dang boy that was a really good poem. your language was so beautiful... thanks 4 the comment btw!

Hey thanks so much 4da comment.. ur a fantastic poet.. i love ur work keep it up mwa!!

This is WONDERFUL!!!!!! Wow, what are you talking about? May I have your autograph!! =)

Kool poems. gud job. brenda ur .. gf

Wow I really enjoyed reading this one! Its is absolutely a m a z i n g!