Comments : On lips that are silent

  • 18 years ago

    by Gesselle Valle

    Sometimes is really hard to express the way we feel...I like it 5/5 Great job my friend...take care and keep it up ^_^

  • 18 years ago

    by N.M.Sanden

    I don't particularly enjoy sad poems, but I enjoyed the scheme you used in this poetry. Its hard for me to feel poetry in which rhyming is its only gimic, use of words is the most important thing. I commend you!

    ~TomWillis~

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    Awe. I love this. It's short but sweet and sad. So good. I can totally relate.