Oh wow, such emotion. I LOVE your rhyme scheme. You can really draw your reader in. props to you.

Omg Ruthie...This is the most powerful poem I've ever read in my life, and it gave me such a great feeling. You're very talented, I can't even explain how much I loved this one. Keep writing hun cause you're amazing at it.

YOU $A%^&^%$ RULE! This poem is great but it is awesome with the perfect flow, rhyme scheme, and narration. It's also long!! Yayayaya.

Keep up the good work.

I really like the ending:
But there's no demon
No darkness, or night
Just curtains of lace
And beautiful light...

This is an absoloutely beautiful poem. Such grace in your writing that it just flows of the page. Well done

I LOVE the last stanza! THIS POEM RULES!! :D

A sweet poem, at first I thought it would end sadly but I really liked how you turned it around. The last stanza was awesome, really poetic and a perfect finish. Nice work :)

O this is really awesome.

That was awesome! I absolutley loved it. One of my new fav's.

~Alicia