This is a fantastic poem, you are very talented. keep it up hun!

This is a really good poem! Keep on the good work :)

Really sweet, it all came together at the very end. 5/5
taylor

Hey. it sounds really nice and...i know how you feel. cool cool. laterz.

Omg. wow. this is deep. i totally love it. the best i've read in a while if it was possible 10/10!!!!

Wow. That's exactly what I feel like most of the time. Awesome poem. Write sum More :)

Why dont u write a poem called you are cuz u sound like a sweet big hearted girl, and i loved the poem.

Hey, thanks for commenting on my poem. I like this poem, i can relate to it because that's how i feel sometimes. You are talented, keep up the good work hun.

I like you poem it came together really well 5/5

""But when it comes to the real world,
I'm a fish surrounded by sharks.""
That bit's brilliant.. how you write this piece is awesome, thanks for commenting on mine and directing me to yours, you're awesome..byebye:D

Really sweet well written poem. think it would perhaps benefit from being a stanza or two longer as i just wanted to read more:D
please return the favour xxxLoUxxx

"I smother my face is fakehood"?
You may need a a comma this line kind of threw me
IS IT
I smother.... my face is fakehood, OR
I smother my face in fakehood,?

I love the hook at the end of this poem 5

Beautiful. very moving. well done

Ruby

Wow, I didn't see that ending coming, but I really liked it. There was a good flow with good meaning - and it showed a low self-esteem which is unfortunately very present, but that just means that alot of us will find it easy to connect with this poem. You have no complaints from me 5/5 :)

Bravo very well written and I loved the ending!!!

Omg this is such a good poem i luv it!!! its so cute!!

OMG!!!....lovely poem...beautiful poem..flowed wel....n i loved the ending...lol...but did'nt want this 1 to end...so well written...great poem...
Kp it up!
Amazing write!5/5!
xxPoojaxx