It’s lovely how you care for someone’s life so much. I’m sure many people wished they had an angel like you, beautiful poem, as always

Serenity xoxox

It’s lovely how you care for someone’s life so much. I’m sure many people wished they had an angel like you, beautiful poem, as always

Serenity xoxox

This is an amazing poem. very sad and well written i must say. I really do hope your friend gets help by you and help get threw it. I know she can and it's really sad knowing one of your friends does that. But hey, the only thing you can do is get them better. amazing job once again. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

ps: thanks for the comment means alot to me.

Wow, that is really nice of you. You are a great friend and she is luck to have you. It will be easier for her to quit with your help, I know it would have helped me if I had someone. Good luck baby!

-Tainted Mikochan

Wow that is a very powerfull, sweet and touching poem.

That is so sad. I Love this poem...

I'm sure you get alot of comments from people saying that this poem is really meaningful, and that its good someone could write about it and express it that way that you have. Well I think this poem is a great one, but I cannot say that I relate. Which is ok, but then again somewhat not.
However, I am going to tell you what I think of this poem. I think this poem is a great way of showing people that you really do care about your friends, and not only that, but people in a complete general. If you have the time and effort to write this poem the way you have, then your effort should be appreciated. I also think that your poem, shows how some people go thorugh a life thinking its okay to do the things they have done.
Im not trying to be a critic. I did enjoy reading your poem, and by the amount of people who have viewed it, I can assure you that it is one of the best.
Please continue to write. I'm sure you have inspired others to do so as well. I think i have a topic to write about now. So I thank you.

Omg hunni this poem is so sweet! you have such a big heart to be there for your friend. we need more people like you around the world. i love the poem. 5/5. lyl~lex

Wow... this is such an inspiring poem that you wrote for your friend.. reading this poem is very touching and it gives people hope that they can make it thru depression very well written and a wonderful message to it =) i hope it works out for you.. beautiful poem

--emotionless19*

One of the sweetest dedications i have ever seen.
a poem liek this is sure to help her realise that life can be filled with happiness too..with angels by your sides.
you are an amazing person..
take care huni and all the best to ur friend as well..
>torn -x.x.x-

Though I didn't like this as much as the other two, but I like how you can make a rhythm for your poems, it flows just right and the tone you set them in, it just makes the whole poem more readable.

A nice and sweet dedication. Good stuff. =)

A really heartfelt piece, hope it does the job.

Keep writing
Nici

Hey sabrina. powerful poem. hit me hard, almost cried kind of thing. Keep writing cos you're doing a great job. :)