That touched my heart. It really did, I thoguht it was true at first but in the end it said it wasnt.anyway great job and keep it up!

Julie

Really sad poem, but beautiful writing. 5/5 Great job and keep it up ^_^ always take care.

Great write... very sad

OMG, you have such a creative mind and a beautiful talent. I am glad this wasn't based on a true story, but it could very well be. Beautiful but sad write..... wonderful job Chelz.......

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela