It ended on a pretty deep note.
I liked that it was short but to the point.
Good work!

//Truest Lies//

I agree with truest it short but to the point i really liked it.♥

Very well written, yuo captured the feelings of cutting very well.

5/5

O my it feels so good
And yet I look at myself in disgust

^^I feel the same way. Cutting is so addiciting like a drug. Great work and if need to talk send me a private email I would be happy to talk to you

Julie

YUK!!! he.ll no i really ewww!! sorry i mean i write about cutting i use to do it but i hate when people take as cutting a fun addiction kinda way. It's freaken nasty but i'm not saying you did a bad job. You did an amazing job of writing this but it's just to nasty for me to take in more and more. Gives me an idea for something but anyway keep it. keep on writing. I really wish you would stop hurting yourself if you are. we all love you in here.

Amazing job, you really displayed your emotions well! The flow was good and it was deep. I really liked the lines:

"These scars never seem to fade away
But yet I can never seem to quit
It just takes all of my pain away"

^^ That there is the truth. Wonderfully written, keep up the awesome work!
~Luvz~
~Angie~
xoxo

Oh hun please don't cut yourself