Good poem.. I liked how you spoke how you felt awesome.. and good job with the repititions with "every" lol and also i like how you ended it good job =)

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I like the way u Spoke you have holp me a lot Amber

I really liked very nice Rachelm very nice written.

I liked that, the way you described how you feel. Keep it up.
Vampire Angel

Great job! hey rach whats up?
hey can you check out my new poem "The Black Rose Night" thanx :)

Hey, I like this poem there is a lot of emotion in it. Great work and take care, I hope everything is ok =D
- Polly

I can totally relate to this...great job.
5/5. stay strong.

This poem was straight from the heart, and the readers can feel that. I really enjoyed reading.