Amazing job. i think this happens to everyone. I mean i'm a middle child and sometimes it feels like my parents don't know i'm there or they would yell at me for no reason, just me no one else. it does suck and it's sad i would have to say. You did an amazing job and your first verse the last line in it you have because spelled becuase just let you know to change that. thanks for the comments. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

Alot of people could relate to this poem thats why its so amazing you put so much emotion into it good job♥

Super work, yu did an amazing job.

You**

If only your parents flowed as well as this poem... hugs

Wow i love this poem...this is the 1st poem that i read so far and i really like it...u have a unique style that i like to read....i love that and i c that u r soooo sad....i don't want that...lolz...well all i can do to make u feel better is to give u a 5/5 and a great job...

I enjoyed this because I can relate to it, and I think you describe the 'situation' very well. Usually I get bored reading long poems, but yours kept my attention right till the end.

I liked this stanza:
'As I turn the music real loud
So I can't hear them yelling
I look through many journal entries
That reveal the story I'm telling..'

Because you really go into it and say exactly what you do to try to get away from it all, and it brings the message of the poem out very nicely. Hmmm I'm not sure if that made complete sense but yeah that is just what I think :) Nice write!

This poem was amazing not because of the word and diction in the poem but because of the emotion and how personal it was to you, i can feel your hurt and pain and that can make any poem really amazing. I gave you 5. My fav two lines were

Just because I live here
Doesn't mean I belong

I LOVED IT

This poem was amazing not because of the word and diction in the poem but because of the emotion and how personal it was to you, i can feel your hurt and pain and that can make any poem really amazing. I gave you 5. My fav two lines were

Just because I live here
Doesn't mean I belong

I LOVED IT

I can relate to this poem in many ways. Keep up the awesome work. 5/5 =)

Wow.. its so true for me.. i know exactlly how you feel.. you write about that kind of stuff.. if you ever need anyone to talk to im here.. another 5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

As with the other 15 people lol i thought it was really gud! i hope you feel better though :/ life gets rough but you can always smooth out the bumps keep up the good work babe :D!

Excellent
5/5
very good flow
can totally relate
nice
love
amy