That was really good and i can relate to that exactly right now... good job

I loved it, it was sooooooooooo good. :)

I liked some parts, but for some reason when you wrote, you can't give a dam that really overused the mild bad-word sort of structure.
I think one dam is more than enough.
Anyway, that is only my thoughts.

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It rocks

Hey, I too like to write lyrics. I haven't done so in a really long time so being able to read a song from you, the first thing I did was try and find a smooth rhythm and sing to it. For the most part, the rhythm in my head worked, and I really liked it. The lyrics are really easy to connect with, for alot of people I'm sure. I noticed you didn't get a very high rating, but I personally think you should have gotten better. I give you a 5/5 and hope to see some more of your songs. :P I like singing to them, creating my own rhythm hehe. Great job!