Aw this is a fantastic poem hun, very descriptive and expressive, you are a very talented girl thank you for sharing your beautiful talent with us here on the site, well done once again, keep on writing and take care,xxoo

Wow this poem is amazing, ur an excellent writer. 5/5
take care huni
luv xxEmmaxx

This is beautiful poem!!! All through it i was like "I can totally relate to it" and its true i can. It was beautifully written and with such a passion!!! i loved it!!!
luv jess xoxo

In this picture
I see happiness
But in the mirror i see pain
In this picture i see forever
In the mirror i see rain

I LOVE that part... I love this whole thing. Great writing hun. Keep your head up, because things will get better I promise you. But as for now when things aren't so good, feel free to talk to me anytime. Great poem! =)

Hey darling a very em0ti0nal p0em. such a sad and t0uching piece. very heartfelt. very well wriotten th0ugh. all the best f0r the ew year hun!!! t0 y0u and y0ur family. keep up the amazing w0rk..always here f0r u! =)

l0tz 0f l0ve /d0ra
-*x00o00x*-

Wow this is an amazing poem. I absolutely love it!

Aw hun that was absolutely touching and great
I felt every word coming from inside :)
keep it up
missing ya gurl ;)
Lov
Nema x0xx0x0x0

Passed shivering in me..honestly dear...this was a great one, i hv to read ur poem daily as a dose.. :o)

fantastic poem

take care and all the best

**just wondering - r u Indian? - as Gill sounds Indian's last name**

Beatiful poem. and so true.

I really really really like this poem! I gave it a 5! It has alot of meaning to it. Keep writing because you're really good!
×Lucy× ×3

Love love love it.

That how i feel about my ex right now

Your a great writer!!

Wow! I raelly like this one :) it's awesome. 5/5

Awsum,like the title