Good poem. A lot of emotion. Awesome job.

Tiffany.xox.

Nice job, keep up the good work keep your head up

Full of emption. well done

Wow.. this is a short and sweet poem.. my favourite part was

"Everytime the phone would ring
I'd jump up to see if it was you"

that is so sweet.. i dont kno how many times people have done that but it has to be a lot..

i really like this poem, its shows us how quickly we can fall in love but how quickly we can fall out of it.. great write keep it up =)

--emotionless19*

I really liked this... as in some of your other poems i have read, you really express your emotions well through your free verse... nice job and keep it up!

sammie

Great work, this poem is very heartfelt.

I think i have a tear in my eye. So heartfelt and emotionlly filled. Keep up the wonderful work

Juls~

Another great poem - truly interesting and meaningful keep writing 5/5 =)

I can relate mostly to this