Something better

by Anna   Dec 30, 2005

Something better

Don't look at me like I don't cope well
just leave me alone and go to hell.
You never cared though I couldn't wait
to hear your excuse but now it's too late.
Do you really think I stop showing fight
after all the tears I've cried at night.
I wasted my time but it doesn't matter
cause now I know that I deserve SOMETHING BETTER.


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  • 18 years ago

    by LostSoul

    Lol! Shortness, but this time I was prepared, because it is your writing style, it is what you are good at. So why would I try to change it?

    The only thing I can say really is that a little line spacing could make the poem look nicer and neater, also making it easier to read, some people open a poem and it is all close together and messy and they just leave, without reading the poem (I know I do that sometimes).

    Great poem, 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Dean Russell-Rands

    Yeesh - thats was fnatastic - I loved it 5/5=) well done

  • 18 years ago

    by Leona

    Wow great job it is really good keep up the good work and thank you for looking at y poems

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura Ash

    Omg that's me right there. Thanks for commenting my poem "a new love" i really appreciate it!

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    Good write. A bit short for me personally but i think if you had to extend it, it would be a kick ass poem. Anyways thats just my opinion. Thanks for the comments! Greatly appreciated!