Excellent!

What a powerful message! Great job!

Vivid, haunting and a lesson to all...words are the worst weapon....unlike the pain of other weapons, words linger and stay long after the assailant is gone. Wonderfully done.

*Hugs* Thanks Bill *Cheesin*

Very powerful and strong message..... and its so damn true, words can be so hurtful and do more harm than good. Wonderful write....

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

Damn. I love that you repeated
"Eleven Dozen Roses
And One That Doesn't Matter"
I think that was the most powerful part. People don't realize how damaging their words can be to someone. Beautifully written Nikki. Take care and happy new year. XXXXX
JL

OH WOW!! I'm in tears......I used to be one of these bullies growing up thinking I was the best but thankfully by Junior high I came close to God which in his eyes everyone is beautiful and people came into my life and showed me what I was doing was wrong...what sucks is everyone gets made fun of at least once in their life and they never forget it if it was one time or more....This poem was beautifully sad Nikki you did a great job getting the message across!
~Chelsey~

Superb! A wonderfully written poem... Very deep!

This poem has so much meaning and I think everyone should read it! Great job on the writing.

Holy cow!!! so true. last year random guys use to tell me i was ugly, but the guys last year now tell me my pretty. all duo to a simple change in style (i dress more like a girl) it reall got me pissed though, and hurt so bad.
great poem. 5/5

Revo

This poem is amazing i hope everyone who are those bullies can see what they're doing. i loved this poem so freakin much! lol :)

Awww! Another amazing piece, with a great message. I hope the word gets out sooner or later because it's not only children that are cruel anymore. Keep writing and I'll do my best to keep posting. Lots of love -stefhy

Awsome write, never read one like it, 5/5 keep it up!

Same 2 You Nika *Hugs* Luv Ya!

Excellent poem Nikki! loving the message as well. i know from experiance that it's certainly not fun to be the victum of the jokes. i got made fun of for having big feet, like a clown. this message is extremely important. i can't stand walking through the halls at school for i'm no longer picked on but they have moved on to someone else. i don't see how anyone could find fun in hurting someone. it's lame, stupid and extremely hurtful as this poem goes to show. things like this can make someone do something unimaginable.

~Jacklyn

Jackie: I Agree With You 101%, I Know Everyone Has Been The Victim Of Someones Joke At Sometime In Their Life No Matter How Cool They Think They Are, And Its Just Not The Smartest Thing To Do....Teasing And Tormenting People With Rude Comments Are Highly Immature And Un-neccasiry xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

Yes that's true i love this poem...

Its truely sensational. I used to be one of the people who got teased. it isnt as bad now, but i learn to excepit it. I love your poems and this one especially.. i love the part of eleven dozen roses, and one that doesnt matter.