That was HOT right there, nice poem 5/5

"fight my battle,
to be free,
they cant take away freewill."

I liked that last part it was really good, the whole pem what good .
keep it up .
~April~

First, I like how you try to rhyme the last word of every verse, which makes the flow smoother. More, I like your cut-off style structure, and mix with the simplicity of it, it's a rather clear-cut poem. I like that.

Back to the message you convey here, I can't really grasp hold of the exact meaning you’re trying to express, call me stupid (=P), but I had to read it a couple of times. Lol. Anyway, the first part of the poem seems to me you're trying to say that battles are useless and it leads to nowhere, and the later part of it got me confused. So in the end I took it as you're trying to fight for your own freedom. Not sure if I got it right though, but all in all I did enjoy reading it. A rather inspirational piece to me. Thanks for sharing. =)

Amazing job. I really liked this one alot. It gives a piece of how soldiers would be. That no matter what you do fight or win you will always have that one thing to fall back on which is your heart telling you what to do. You hit the spot on that. keep it up. keep on writing. your very talented. love always and forever.

Wow... this was so amazingly written! you did such a wonderful job writing this... you have me extremly impressed! keep it up, i can tell you are very talented!

sammie

Wow.. what an inspiring poem =) i am very impressed... this poem had so much truth in it becuz everyday ppl are giving up there lives for us.. i think this is a great tribute to them... keep up the great work =) once again amzing poem lots of strong words and emotion and intensity to it!

--emotionless19*

Hmm.. just the last part make me turn my head... the beginning on through was amazing until i saw the last stanza but, still it was great
-Rachel

I really like this. imspiring. nice job!