Great work..love it.Im tired to see lairs to but thats life for ya. Great work I couldnt have explained it any better myself.
Julie~

Great poem hun...keep it up..5/5
Xox Laura Marie Xox

Nice poem neily! =) and it's true..everywhere there are liars...i lie too sometimes..everyone does right? hehe, anyway, keep up the good work! =D

I like the way you really put the message down of people pretending to be someone they are not.
I love it! well done :)

~*TasH*~

Nicely said...ive noticed it too...good job :)

much love,
becca

Wow neil thats good keep it up

Love aimee

Great poem neil i kno exactly how you feel!!!
-cory

That was really good n I know what you mean...I am one of those people with the fake smile unfortunatly...n i hate it too...
good job
luvs Ashley
xx

Sosssososo true neils....thats awesome...wonderful job
keep writing...

Aw, hun this is such a true poem, very well done you're a talented writer and this poem definetly speaks of the truth, I see this too, well done once again, take care,xoxo

Your not the only one...i am too..all my friends lieing to me...guys always using me for how i look rather than how i feel...stuff like that...but thats ok cuz theres always pple like you around to drown them out...
i love yer poem neil keep it up
~all my love~
cherry

Heya!
This poem is so true.
These day's everyione is fake, great way of putting it to words!
Well done, I really enjoyed it!

xX

Good poem....very true also and i like the way its oredered. keep it upp!!!

.::Diana::.

You have a great talent
use it wisely
lol
i love your poem its so truth felt
great work
I dont lie unless i absolutely have to
so my comments are the truth and nothing but
thanks for sharing
Em

Hey that was a gud poem it was nice i liked it alot keep up the hard work that was a tru story on life

Wow gr8t work..5/5...u got talent dnt let it go to waste lol...love dia mwaz xoxo

It is very good but it does get a bit repetetive not too much though so rounded up its pretty good