Now That Your Gone

by Cari   Jan 1, 2006


Your laugh was so peaceful. Like everything was good and always would be.
The way you looked at me, made me feel so weak. I felt loved.
How intense it was to run my fingers through your hair. It was supposed to be right.
When I looked you over, you were so perfect. Alive and well with me.
Now that your gone, tears sting my eyes when I think of you.
I think of how you used to dry my tears and that just makes them fall harder and quicker.
I can smell the last remains of you when I walk into your house.
It gets worse after your bedroom door creaks creaks open.
I see what you were and what you wanted to be.
I see it all.
I see it all now that your not with me.
Now that your gone.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Dreams

    'I see what you were and what you wanted to become' I'd suggest '...wanted to be' instead of 'become' it helps with the flow. Just a suggestion. =)

    Anyway, like I've said earlier, if you can break your poem up in stanzas, give it a structure, I think it'd be great. This piece spreads a deep meaning and with these emotions running along the lines, it makes the readers feel with you. Good job. Thanks for sharing. =)

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