Why did we part?

by Landon Carter   Jan 1, 2006


Why did you leave me?
Why did we part our one way?
why did it have to be end this way?
Did i deserve this for new year?
i ask why? oh my baby why?

i trusted you in all the way
i trusted, when you said you loved me
i trusted, when you said you would always be with me
And i Convinced you when you were afraid to lose me..
Because i only wanted to be with one person and that was you.
but now i realise from my grip your hands are slipped away
I liked you better the way you were,
but you were always so ambitious.
Now its me and myself
no more of us
i feel so lonely, and so incomplete
sinking in the ocean of my own tears..
dont know how to begin this new year..
it's the worst eve of new year ever.

- Strange it is when someone says you don't need to be changed and you are perfect. But then they are the ones who leave us forever alone -

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  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    I ask why? oh my baby why?
    ((I don't know why, but these simple words broke my heart..))
    Strange it is when someone says you don't need to be changed and you are perfect. But then they are the ones who leave us forever alone -
    ((I Loved this...it's so true, yet so sad.))

    I really liked this. You could feel the emotion in it; it was so sad and upsetting! It held truth beyond meaning in it as well; you explained it well. Good job.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by **Stacy**

    Oh my gosh i kno exactly how u feel cuz i feel the same way right now. but u kno we have to hold our heads up high. don't worry we cud get through this. loved the poem. take care.

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