I have to tell you but there are no words for me to use. Instead I will show you. Give me a blade, give me a knife and I will show you how I live my life.

^^^that explains my life so well. I couldnt have explained this any better, great work

Julie

Hey great poem.. thw words r really fantastic and i love da way its written!! well done..Stephy :)

Very well written. and meaningful too. well done...

I dont understand why you would give someone else advice
and not take your own advice first ..
So i hope its not true cuz that would be kinda ... dumb .. (no offense) =S
But great poem
I didnt mean to offend you in anyway so im sorry if i did.

Wow...ive felt like that so many times
but i like the way you wrote it and the words and theperspective... definate 5/5

You might wanna change the "to" into a "too" in the first stanza...other then that its excellent 5/5

Hun, excellent poem. ok, by the way this sounds, you're thinking of killimg yourself. please don't. if you need to talk, message me.
5/5
**lisa**

Amazing stuff... very thought & feeling provoking
5/5
love
amy

Really deep and full of emotion..Cutting really isn't the best choice to solve your problem try writing poems when your stressed it helps trust me I know from experience..
!^I Love Being In Love^!

Hey this is excellent! truely remarkable. i luv it
dont hurt ya self. k. i hope this is all fiction

luv amy