Omg girl this is awsum. i expecially luv
Little angel spread your wings,
Lift from this land and the mourning it brings.
Drown your sorrows and keep your peace,
Little angel, find your release.

keep it up sxc
amy

Its really good, love the whole thing,,,,

NICE i luuuuurve it!! *giggle* no but seriously i really do love it.. i tend to love sad poems when they're good because they have the ability to make me sad.. and because there's talent there... i hope that i can write as well as you do at some point, that would be a wonderful achievement!!
amanda

Wow, this was really good.
You've used good words this reads really well. I like the idea and the way it's constructed.
5/5
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xxx cici xxx

Its really good, much fancy words :D

Thats so good i love it girl, really nice written, xoxo Rachel

WOW! this is 1 of the most awsomest poems ever......5/5

Wow. that was excellent. i loved it! you know i'm giving you a 5!

Your cool

Wow! Your a really really good writer! Your vocabulary is amazing! It flowed so well together! Actually when i was reading it, a tune sorta cam in my head lol! Its like a song! Anyway i luved the lines:

"Drown your sorrows and keep your peace,
Little angel, find your release."

Thats the one part of the poem that really stuck out to me. Your a great writer and you've got real talent that most dream of! Keep up the wonderful work! Take Care. =D 5/5
~Luvz~
~Chica~
xoxo

Wow this poem is exceptional!!! Very imaginative and beautifully written! Love everything about it!!!

Excellent work! luvd this poem! 5/5