Getting caught

by ashley buzzard   Jan 3, 2006


On a quiet summer evening, there Joey sat thinking of cheating.
Joey thought of himself a lot,most people would call him a hotshot.
Joey's girlfriends name was Chloe, Chloe was madly in love with Joey.
what Joey hadn't thought, was he just might get caught.
all this time he had been cheating and never been caught.
he would here Cloe say
"Forget me not."

Joey broke Chloe's heart, to him they had just drifted apart.
but he wasn't being very smart, only getting caught.
joey would lie, only making Chloe cry.
Chloe wanted to die, asking herself why.
instead she thought of a wicked plot, wanting to hit him with a flower pot.
Chloe though to herself
Forget me not.

Chloe stabbed Joey with a knife, Hoping to take his life.
Joey's eyes became bloodshot, Chloe hoping she wouldn't get caught.
She wanted to kill him with a machete, but her hands were just to sweaty.
if only he would die, she would let him rot
leaving him bleeding in that one spot.
she said to him,
"Forget me not."

she even practiced voo-doo, because he her he was not true.
she made sure to poke him a lot, especial in his week spot.
he prayed night and day, for someone to take him away.
Chloe couldn't Deni, she loved Joey a lot.
but then again, joey did hurt her a lot
making himself here
"Forget me not."

to her it was unbelievable, that he was so unreliable
the metal she made hot, making sure it hurt alot
he should of let her be, for she had some pretty mean tricks up her sleeves.
she sat there and thought, how could she have forgot
no more would he think of himself as a hotshot, it was time for her to carry out the real plot.
she said silently
"Forget me not."

she knew it was over, when he came home with a hangover
after using what she had been taught, she fired a gun shot
from this he would
"forget her not."

Chloe went to jail, which sucked cause she didn't have any money for bail
her friend found the spot, and away Chloe got.
her heart was broken, from all the words Joey had spoken
she went to the spot to see the mad she had shot
she cussed a whole lot, at the man she had shot
said to him
"You will forget me not."

one month later she lay a basket beside his casket
forget she would not, hoping his body would rot
from ten on every month in a year she lay 3 roses and a beer
5 years later she tied a know, and prayed a lot
because in her, forget she would not
she took one last breath, and said
"forget i will not."

we had an assignment in my LA class to write a parody of the Raven and this is what i came up with. let me know what you think.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tammi

    I think this is very good and keep it up I love it 5/5