Great poem!

This poem is simply beautiful, and the imagery compliments it perfectly. i love the spoken part at the end, how it sums up the entire peice. amazing.
stef/xx

Wow thats really good. Keep up the good work
Megan

I like the speaking part alot it makes a good ending to it and i like how you can see how she feels. good work
Mollie

Inspiring and beautiful poem huni.
different layout and that was quite successful throughout the poem.
Keep writing, and thank you for your comment xoxo

Hey, your work is really really good :o) xx

Great poem, kepp them coming and take care hun sarah x

I meant keep lol

Can you do
'Runaway" and "The Note They Found On The Floor" thanx :)

Great poem its amazing, i love the way you've written it. Keep up the good work. thanks again for your comments
Take Care Emma xxx

This one was good, && sad! I really like it though. I'm not sure if it's meant to be about you, Or maybe a friend. But if it's about a close friend. Then you are truely one great friend, For trying to help, Or atleast wanting too. Keep it up polly 5/5

`natalie x-x

Omg I wouldnt change a thing!!!!!!!! If this is a personal poem I hope everything gets better!!! VERY GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Rach ♥

I can actually relate to this poem slightly, os that makes it so much more wonderful then it already was. Great Job.