Well, I have unfortunately been cheated on, but he told me - he didn't lie. So I'm still with him and I'm still happy to be with him. It was a long time ago it happened, but reading this poem seemed to bring back all the hurt I had once felt. Which shows that your writing showed alot of feeling, emotion and even a great flow for the rhyming. It was really well done.
Personally, I have never known sadness of this kind, but I love the poemIt sounds as if there's maybe a little anger or resentment at the fact that the person cheated. Never happened to me, but I understand. The sadness of it is hitting me in waves. Excellent job, though.
I havent been cheated on but i have been lied to and the feeling that results is not great...i love this one and cant wait to read the next one... i always comment on your poems because i want you to kno that i really love your poems and i comment on almost every poem i read... great job and keep it up
This is another fantastic poem hun, you're very talented, and a BOY ha, wow sorry i'm not sexist but I dont really expect boys to have feelings or write beautiful poetry, ialways thought you were cruel but you proved me wrong heh, ohh and you're a drummer howw lovveeely we shud form a band mwahahaha my friend wants to form a band so she can cuuff the hot drummers and bassists but okay too much info kthx. prettypoeeeeem
That was really good, I felt the amount of emotion and pain you put into this poem, it made me anxious to read it all....that's a great thing to interest and lock your reader into you poem, it was so intense, I seriously loved it. Although some lines need question marks, and some words have a little grammar errors, you should fix them up because they tend to have a big effect. But yeah, amazing.....