Comments : Alone

  • 16 years ago

    by Prophecies In Kodak

    Jess,
    We've talked a bit..and you always seem to comment my poems, but I never comment back. you commented my "Untitled' poem and said you understood. Well love, I know this feeling all to well. You, are now added to my favorites. Very good write, as is everything else you write, take care.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ixora

    Wow nice sweety...very strong and such a vivid picture in the writing...great great job i love it...

    *^*crow*^*

  • 16 years ago

    by Matthew A.

    Very nice Jess. Love your rhymes and the way you speak them. Hope to talk to you soon and stuff.

    ~Matt~

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Halu!!! ;)

    Wow Jess, this is really awesome. I know how it feels to not have faith in love due to past experiences but hey, you never know...he could be different right? Well anyway I'm glad you posted this...I wanted to read something new from you.:) 5/5

    TAKE CARE-
    stargazer38

  • 16 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    Hey Jess,
    Thanks for comment and this poem is very deep, I loved it. And you forgot me on my profile but it's all good.

    Heather

  • 16 years ago

    by Ed

    Ello!
    You can laugh now I'm here, you always do :P Oh yeah, I like egss as well :D
    fantastic poem as well, the words just... came out. Brilliant. ^_^
    Ed. :D xxxxxxxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Heidi

    And yet another one of your amazing poems... keep up the great work jess ;D

  • 16 years ago

    by Vicissitude Of Fate

    Hey Jessica..I'm sorry i never get the chance to comment on any of your poems anymore!:'( i feel bad cause yeah i know you like comments even though i don't leave the best ones lol I'v started on a new poem and stuff and i want you to read it lol Remind me to show it to you I love you, Byebye

    ~Mallory

  • 16 years ago

    by Dino

    WoW excellent poem,very deep...I love it=) 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Kylead

    Great poem jess just lettin ya know i havent completely forgotten bout ya
    LOve kyle chou

  • 16 years ago

    by Tim Bradshaw

    As your lips gently joined mine,
    Leaving no space in between,
    I simply jerked away and whispered,
    "Tastes like an excuse for pain to me."

    My favorite part. Your ending was brilliant. I loved it. No matter how much you know about something temptation sets in and you just go with it. great poem 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Vicissitude Of Fate

    I let my cousin read this one.. She said it was great absolutely great and that she loved it and thought it was one of the best she has ever read.. i hope this helps your problem... Call me later at my Dad's if you want to talk... I love you byebye..

    ~Mallory

    p.s. I wrote a new poem.. *nods*

  • 16 years ago

    by Josiah Larson

    Very good poem, I love the way you rhymed and the words you used. Such a emotionel poem.

    Great job and keep on writeing! I would love to read more!

    -Josiah

  • 16 years ago

    by phuckwithme_imsuperman

    Wow that was longgggg but it was good i liked it

  • 16 years ago

    by JussxAxNobody

    AMAZING!!! I hadn't seen a new one for a while...I was beginning to worry ;)
    Great great job Jess. Loved it.
    Keep it up! *JussJuss*

  • 16 years ago

    by rachyBBY

    Wow thats a really good poem. i loved it!! i like all ur poems..keep writing!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by nick crosswell

    Wow u have an amazing talent! well done love it!
    oo-nick-xx