Brilliant, i love this poem, straight from the heart no doubt.

Other great pome of yours, keep up the good work and if you want to talk email me or you can alwasy find me in the chat room on the site.
Juls

Not offended at all Hawaiizangel! I totally agree with you actually! I Need a new twist to things.... I'm currently working on a few peices that aren't rhymed... it's hard tho they keep turing out to be books!!