by xEmmax Jan 6, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
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Jagged rocks litter the ground, tearing your fragile skin, |
by Corruption
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Wow fantastic poem it is so dark and well written great job lots of feeling and emotion in it lol great job and thanks for the comment |
by Esther
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I really liked this |
by Zer0riginZ
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Extremely well written, I'm here on behalf of PainofOne and my work "Porcelain Asylum" to which I'm glad you enjoyed. I came to see the talent you put out and I'm glad I came. 5/5 I can visualise this with ease. |
by clare
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OMG!!! |
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Great poem, i love the imagery. i was definatly walking down there as i read it. 5/5 loved it |