Very good poem, keep up the good work!

I love how put a guy's point of view in this poem. a classical piece that just vibrate with a haunting melody. ;D 5/5

"When suicide looks so good
And love seems so bad
You tthink you know you should
And you know and wish you had

When you see them in the hall
And your spirits grow weak
Your heart begins to fall
And its blood you seek" my two favorite verses they're so me wow, i wish the boy would be the boy that i like i wish he'd love me hehe not suicide lol, but anyways this is such a heartfelt poem, im glad you re-posted it hun, it's very sad and beautiful, great work once again,xxoo

Wow this poem was amzing....I get wat u trying to say great job. Thanx 4 ur comments...means alot. Again great job, I loved every stanza....

::MELI::

Omg ur poem is soooooo good. i wish i could write like that

Hells ya this poem is the best keep up the good work.
Leona

What a heartbreaking write, but it does send out a strong message as well...... beautifully written.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

Wow! good thing you reposted it it's my favourite right now!

Very good poem, well written with wonderful flow. Amazing job.

When suicide looks so good
And love seems so bad
You think you know you should
And you know and wish you had

*mouth drops open*

Wow. urm... Wow. That rings so true with how i'm feeling at the moment.

Lv A, x