This is an absolutely beautiful poem...cutting is such a popular theme for sad poetry, but you seem to still bring through something original, and the emotion in it is very aparent. A very sad poem, but a very good read. Keep up the good work.

-Stationary Faerie-

As you said in a comment to me once: Oh my holy wow.

Becky, that was amazing. I was really blown away, and I have to say that was such an amazing, original twist on something so mormal. That was your best poem, and maybe even one of the best on the site. All I can say is wow.

Becky, you rock.

Matt

Thats awsome. You can picture in in your thoughts so well. Honestly it kinda scares me. I can feel what it means. Not wanting to commit to yourself. Its a really great poem. I don't think I've read a better one.

This poem was beautiful...........i am absolutely speechless....you made me feel as if i was watching the whole thing unfold beneath my eyes...it was really amazing. You have serious talent!!! Keep up the amazing work!!!
luv jess xoxo

Wooooooooww!! i love it love it love it !! lol it was so great!! i love the first two lines the best i can just imagine it grea imagery throughout like the entire thing wowa 5/5

Wow! that was simply wonderful. keep it up.
Emma5/5

Aww hun that is really sad!!! Very deep but great job sweetie... I liked it alot

Aww that poem is so good ur amazing at writing poems!!!!

Oh my gosh Becky... this poem is so sad... ahh almost made me cry. Very welldone though. You are definitely talented so I hope you keep on writing.

Thank you for sharing this piece. It is well written and I appreicated the fact that there is no forced rhyming.

Keep writing
Nici

Oh god i am actually speechless! ...it was outstanding! it really was. i read it twice n just wow! this poem is my favourite, i could really understand it. i loved it, although it was so very sad, and quite chilling. amazing work,
take care huni xxxxxx

I normally don't read really long poems, I just got half way.
But this one made my eyes lock on it and I couldn't stop.
Great work, really.
5/5

Alot of information in this poem. I could totally understand what you were saying and it makes it great to read. Excellent poem hun, keep up the good work cos you have talent! :)

Tht was an amazing poem! i really liked it*5/5

OMG! This is sooo good! I really like it because not only does is sound like a poem, but a story as well. It's hard to find this type of talent! Keep it up and never stop writting! :)

OMG!!! this was sooo goood! good job!, i loved this poem so much! it was really well done
good job,
Jessi

Im back so this is my new site..later nick

Wow that was amazing
I love you style of writing.

U r a really good wirter 5/5

Wow... i cant believe the emotion packed in this poem... so, im guessing the girl in the mirror was her image? sorry, i'm a dumb brunette :P well, loved it. 5/5