For \"Invisible man\"

by Steven   Jan 8, 2006


This a poem for the user \"Invisible man\". I was reading some of your latest posts and it inspired me.

The door closes, the lock clicks.
The clock stops tocking and ticks.
Your alone, in your dark corner.
Just you and that shell you call great.

You think you had friends,
they all turned into dead ends.
You had family too,
But to keep them was against fate.

You went where you are,
You made what you call home.
You took away your future,
and restricted your freedom.

You think you are great,
cuase you think you have control.
You punish the innocent,
dice of joy given a roll.

But your options are one, and none.
And every number below.
You think curse words can hurt us,
and for that you have nothing to show.

You gave up on your life,
and you try to make us take ours.
Your selfish, racist, homophobic.
pessamistic, hateful and not worth it.

I am not strong,
But you are weak.
I stand with others,
alone is your own defeat.

So burn in hell,
cuase after this you aren\'t worth our time.
You ask me for anything,
and I wont give you a dime.

Thats what I think, and I know that other people think it too. And you may think your words hurt us, but they dont, cuase all they do is seperates us more from you.

In the end, you did this. Did it all to yourself, so Buh bye!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Raven Roth

    LOL I luved it. Great Job :)

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    Good write and so true, i think he just needs a hug lol but i don't wanna be the one to give it to him:)

  • 18 years ago

    by LostSoul

    AwsomeworkitsamazingnothingisbetternevergiveupwritingyoureviljustlikemeyetyouramazingandAWESOME

    hehehe

  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Steve! OMG! I love you lmao! your so...thankyou. Im sorry you had to read those posts tho, Im so so sorry! -huggles- but im glad something good came of Andrews rudeness, well done hun you just won a spot in my favs!!!!

    Love Jenn