Ambiguity at it's finest.
How were you to blame?

That was so touching! Wow! Great Job. You are so talented. I am so proud that a talent like you liked my poem. Thank you for commenting on mine. P.S. I just have two questions for you. Was this poem based on real life? Did this really happen in your life? You don't have to tell me but I was just so moved by this poem that it caused me to ask these questions. Excellent job!

Again, AMAZING!!

Aw babe this is heartbreaking. U are truly an amazing writer.
ive heard of a situation like this before, so thta really hit home.

Anytime you wana try out that ice cream to feel better..im there:)
xoxoxo

Wow that poem is really good!! you should keep writing!!
xoxox

This poem was very powerful and worked well for so many reason. The rhyming scheme and the structure were very well thought out and made the whole thing flow perfectly. Then of course the content, well it was just fantastic. I really am at a loss for words now. I love poems like these with a twist at the end.
Well done, keep writing.

*VioletRaven*

Hey thanx 4 commenting on my poem!! tht was great!! u r sooo talentd bubs! amazing i wish i could write lke tht! good- no thts an understatement- great work! lol hehe KEEP IT UP :)xoxo

Wow...another great poem to take my breath away. You truely are an inspiring talented writer.

WHOA!!! That's horrible. Not the poem, but what happens in it.The poem is just another of your masterpieces.It's very well written in every possible aspect that you could consider for a poem. Excellent job done!

Nikki,
the last part is kind of confusing, but it's really good!!! you're really good at writing poems... i have a feeling english is going to be easy for you! lol! well, keep writing!!! sorry i haven't been commenting on more of your poems! i'll try to do better! much love! ~Kim

OMG, this is so heartwrenching..... filled with heartache and pain and remorse........ written beautifully as well.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

Such emotion...
I love the way I though that soemone else killed the parents till I read the end.... that was a good effect

Hey there tiny! you know how much I LOVE unique and awesome, yet small and simple poems! it's like you wrote it just for me! *hugs* thanks beautiful. I always love reading and commenting on your poems so keep it up honey. c u round!
With all my love Ruthie

This poem is so great. I LOVE your work. 5/5

Very nice poem, I am glad it has nothing to do with your personal life. i hope you have a wonderful day

Excellent poem. =)

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

I am so sorry to hear that!! i'm guessing this poem is personally!! sounds like you've been through a lot in you life!! its good you have a way too let it all out!! you are such an amazing writter my poet idol!!! keep up the good work!! and God Bless You!

Wow...amazing.
good job

Your imagery was quite nice.
And the flow went very well.
I enjoy your writing. Keep up the great work. And the message your poetry shows.

Ian.

You are truely amazing with words, you make everything flow so beautifully...you have a real talent=]

Brooke<3