Comments : Have to Keep Trying

  • 18 years ago

    by eternitySOlong

    I loved it! E-mail me and let me know who this one was about!

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    And you definetely showed your feelings in this one Emma. Wow.. It's amazing. I can actually feel the pain. I hope you are ok girl, I really do. Remember I love you Emma. -xxx-

  • 18 years ago

    by Avellana

    So that's why I'm trying so hard to smile,''-

    I'm getting tired of smiling. I like thats this poem isn't verse perfect. It lets your emotions shine through even more.
    Love n hugs, Me. x

  • 18 years ago

    by JAY Poet

    Great poem i really understand!!!!!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    That poem was amazing...loves hard, but you'll find the one who treats you great and everything else...time is the hard part. keep writing you've got a gift. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Bertha

    Dude what are you talking about? i love this poem..you are one of the best writers on this site! and i think anyone would love to be you!

  • 18 years ago

    by Emm

    Wow ... That was really good ... I relate so it makes it even better. Great Job I'll go check out some others