by Raina Jan 8, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
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Everyday my heart cracks and breaks, |
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I loved it!!!! you really let your emotions out.. i feel like im there watching this all happen... keep it up!! |
by StormShadow
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Great poem, the emotions leap out and are really touching. its gota nice rhyming sequence too, which always helps. 5/5 |
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Great poem, I like it! |