Ugly On The Inside

by *Vendetta*   Jan 8, 2006


The closer we get
The farther we become
The more we deceive
The less we believe
& I don't really care
What's happening here
But don't you miss our past
What didn't last
No matter how many stars in the sky
We still wonder why
We're ugly on the inside
When our talking has died
For all that's left is something bitter
Best friends forever
What a kidder

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  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Wow, great work. This poem has good emotion and a great rhyme scheme.

  • 18 years ago

    by Matters

    Hmm...

    I like it... it's a different twist on something original. Wasn't too blow out your brains amazing, but it was still good.

    I'll read your other poem as well, but I won't have time to comment...

    This poem was...good. A high four.

    Please, don't take offense, I liked it. And keep writing, it's a great thing. Keep it up.

    Matt

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