Another favourite, this was so orignial and unique in concept, and the first few lines had me totally hooked.
Is the rose a metaphor for something?
I thought this was fantastic.

Very very very poetic.. spectacular write.. filled with emotion and structure.. i really enjyed reading this poem.. way more than a 5/5

Hmmm interesting indeed! But very powerful in a subtle way! I liked it a lot! There isn't much flow...but I think that the poem sounds better in a broken form. Wow I really do like it! Simple but intense. Atta girl! 5/5

Beauty is bait
I senced your anger at this superficial world we live in.
you are beautiful dont doubt it.

This is perfect. wat else can i say, the starting just starts it all off. its inviting you to continue reading, which i did.

5/5 david

Great job!!!! this poem was amazing. and now that i think of it. i dont get why roses represent love. cause dont in all fairytales and stuff something bad happens with roses? maybe im wrong lol im not into fairytales. but great job. keep it up!!!

Amazingly creative but the rhythm threw me off i have to say...all else was amazing...very nice topic:):)

Deep and really brilliant, so profound, i especially loved the part about being a illiusion of beauty, this is seriously one of my favorite poems i've read in a long time, keep up the good work

I love your imagery with the red rose and the metaphor for what else or who else it might be. Great job 5/5!

~jas~

Jeez, I really loved this one too. As I read it I didn't even think of an actual rose but, more of a person. Great metaphor. So well written. 5/5

marcella

Yeah i agree with what a few others have said, about the rose reminding them of a person/friend who betrayed you, Your style of poem was very unique, unlike any i've read on here, it was amazing.
5/5