Comments : Civilized People

  • 18 years ago

    by Gesselle Valle

    Great poem....so true! Always take care, well done. ^_^ Many big hugs.

  • 18 years ago

    by Anthony

    I loved this poem so bad!!!! My favoite lines were

    "Don't sink your pride that low,
    And follow what they have done.
    If you just continue marching on,
    You can stop what they've begun."

    If Ms. Bryant Doesnt give you an A I swear I'm gonna Boo her!!! IN CLASS!! I sear it!!! ^_^ YOu just proved that you can write about anything.. I think... ^_^ Again, awesome write.

    ~Anthony

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    DEEP! A really meaningful write. Racism is ugly. To me there is no colour. Everyone is a person and deserves the same respect and love that we give to anyone else regardless of race or colour.

    Well written, I hope people take note of this!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Powerful words Atomic....... I have a dream, which is, I wish the rest of the world would read these words and heed them..... Wonderful wonderful write.

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

  • 18 years ago

    by ScarletHaze

    Awesome! and a great message! xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Laura

    This poem was truly astounding. Very well written and the flow was flawless.
    very unique topic witha strong message!!!! Great Write!