Comments : Sun dosent really shine

  • 16 years ago

    by Tammi

    Wow do I feel the hurt in this poem I have been there keep up the good work 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    The poem reflects very well the cold reality of a broken heart

  • 16 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    Wow... I'm impressed... this poem is SO beautiful and so realistic. It expresses the affect of a broken heart so well, and I can feel the pain behind your words. Wow, great writing hun!

  • 16 years ago

    by ellewen

    I love it! Its great! What I find is amazing is how you rhyme so well. I didn't find one mistake, (I might have just woken up) but im sure its still perfect. lol and its nice to have a fan. Im adding you to my favorites :) sincerely
    ~skittles