This poem was really really good but i didnt like how every sentence started with mommy so when i read it i didnt read the word mommy lol. but thats just my opinion the poem over all was so good.
You did an amazing job .. This cant be from experience ... cuz you'de be dead .. o.O Right?

Wow. that is a brilliant peice. written really well. it kind of hooks you in at the begining and maintains that untill thew end. in fact i started to read it quicker and quicker as it went to find out what would happen lol.

amazing poem, really well written and full of emotion and sadness.

5/5

Wow it's a really great poem it's soooo sad but i liked it alot

Great Job. Not a fan of the Mommy's, but other than that the poem was wonderful.

Ohh wow, my heart skiped a beat or two, grabed me from the begining to the end....Just amazing and so sad...Hope this isn't based on something that really happened to you?? A true masterpiece...

Much Love Sabrina

Thank you 4 your comment and i will try to make my writing beter and u keep up the good work

Wow this is really good!
And so sad! You're really taleneted. Keep writing and posting!!

Tiffany.xox.

Omg this was amazing! it really caught my attention, and the repetition at the beginning of each line was very effective. excellent writing 5/5. and thanku for ur comment, it meant a lot,
take care,
luv xxEmmaxxx

Wow that is really deep and really sad.. Your a great writer and you should put more poems on here.. Good job sweetie

This was one of the best poems i have ever reaf for sure i can't believe it thank you for writing such a good poem

Wow. Sad.. actually, really sad. Deep.

Wonderful! very sad, and very exspressive, I love the way you write.
5/5
BloodRedRose

OMFG!! THAT WAS GREAT!!! I LOVED EVERY BIT OF IT... that was sooo twisted, but omfg... that was great... wow... UR AN EXCELLENT WRITER!! :( and if this did happen to u, IM SOOO SRY!!! :(

KK

Loved it-- very good poem!

THAT WAS AREALLY GREAT POEM I THOUGHT IT WAS DEEP WELL KEEP IT UP OK

Thankyou soo much on your comment, tha makes me feel alot better about it, thanks.
BloodRedRose

That was really good. The way you wrote it I guess caught everyones attention. It's sad but it's really good so good job!

This is so good!

Good job you are great poet keep it up so sad