Comments : Me.

  • 17 years ago

    by Spitfire

    I like that
    but it ends on a sad note ;{
    to many emos !!
    just great
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Lexie

    Wow... when i first looked at the poem, i didn't think i was going to like it, but when i read it again. I really do like it. There is something catchy to it. Great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Its good, the sentences are short but they are meaningful, it is sad. Very good try overall.
    well done
    love Tara-Kay

  • 17 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Very good, not many words but those that are there are full of meaning

  • 17 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    Very unique and i kinda saw a pattern there....a very confusing one but oh well lol great poem 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Emily parsons

    Its short and blunt
    but its this that makes it brilliant
    i loved it
    keep it up
    lots of love
    emily
    xxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    It was a basic poem, but you choose your words well to give it a really cool effect. nice job.

    -Tainted Mikochan

  • 17 years ago

    by Dean Russell-Rands

    Nicely done - emotionally poetic - lovin it 5/5 =)

  • 17 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Wow, that just...somehow...has a way of sticking in your head! excellent job hun.
    **lisa**

  • 17 years ago

    by xDryTearsx

    Woow it was so deep and emotional i loved it.

  • 17 years ago

    by t i f f a n y ♥

    Oh this is so good!
    So simple, and written on a wing, but sometimes that's when the best words escape us. Excellent write. 5/5.

    Tiffany.xox.

  • 17 years ago

    by Amanda

    I really think this is an amazing poem. I like the way you wrote it. the style is so good and easy to follow and understand. I thought it was excellent. keep writing more :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Polly

    Wow, in a strange way, it's a really powerdul way.i totally didn't expect it at first, amazing poem. 5/5
    keep it up
    polly xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Polly

    Sorry was writing nonsense...
    *Wow, in a strange way, it's a really powerful poem. I totally didn't expect that at first, amazing poem
    keep it up
    polly xxxx*

    Hope that makes more sense sorry!

  • 17 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Unique poem of emotions. Nice job, I sometime's feel like that

  • 17 years ago

    by Kittie

    Great Job! very quick, and flowing.
    5/5
    BloodRedRose

  • 17 years ago

    by jacquie

    I no what u mean when u say u wrote what i feel, n i have felt what u have writtern. i think this poem is realy good u just need 2 have a certain ammount of understanding

  • 17 years ago

    by Cari

    Wow, for not havin a lot of words there is a lot of feeling... i love it. nice job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Shaylee Rose

    Wow
    that was awsome
    5/5 for sure
    so little words
    but still so pwerful
    LUVD IT