I like that
but it ends on a sad note ;{
to many emos !!
just great
5/5

Wow... when i first looked at the poem, i didn't think i was going to like it, but when i read it again. I really do like it. There is something catchy to it. Great job!

Its good, the sentences are short but they are meaningful, it is sad. Very good try overall.
well done
love Tara-Kay

Very good, not many words but those that are there are full of meaning

Very unique and i kinda saw a pattern there....a very confusing one but oh well lol great poem 5/5

Its short and blunt
but its this that makes it brilliant
i loved it
keep it up
lots of love
emily
xxxx

It was a basic poem, but you choose your words well to give it a really cool effect. nice job.

-Tainted Mikochan

Nicely done - emotionally poetic - lovin it 5/5 =)

Wow, that just...somehow...has a way of sticking in your head! excellent job hun.
**lisa**

Woow it was so deep and emotional i loved it.

Oh this is so good!
So simple, and written on a wing, but sometimes that's when the best words escape us. Excellent write. 5/5.

Tiffany.xox.

I really think this is an amazing poem. I like the way you wrote it. the style is so good and easy to follow and understand. I thought it was excellent. keep writing more :)

Wow, in a strange way, it's a really powerdul way.i totally didn't expect it at first, amazing poem. 5/5
keep it up
polly xxx

Sorry was writing nonsense...
*Wow, in a strange way, it's a really powerful poem. I totally didn't expect that at first, amazing poem
keep it up
polly xxxx*

Hope that makes more sense sorry!

Unique poem of emotions. Nice job, I sometime's feel like that

Great Job! very quick, and flowing.
5/5
BloodRedRose

I no what u mean when u say u wrote what i feel, n i have felt what u have writtern. i think this poem is realy good u just need 2 have a certain ammount of understanding

Wow, for not havin a lot of words there is a lot of feeling... i love it. nice job!

Wow
that was awsome
5/5 for sure
so little words
but still so pwerful
LUVD IT