Who Needs Heaven?When I Have You

by ѕуиєявσу   Jan 11, 2006


When I'm with you I'm in wonder 24/7
nothing compares to you not even heaven
the way your hair falls and your skins so smooth
your smile to the way you gracefully move

the way your cheeky but are never rude
the way we like the same music and eat the same food
the way you cheer me up when I'm feeling down
the way we know what each other are thinking with out making a sound

the way we dance together like nobody's watching
we can Neva hurt each other with our playful boxing
the way you dress i like your style
the way your eyes glisten wen you start to smile

the way we are happy each other just being there
the way you blush wen i cant help but stare

cos i call you baby
and i call you fine
i call you cutie because i know your mine
tho i may not be the strongest
or the smartest boy you see
i am the luckiest cos i know you love me

and i hope that we stay best Friends
and are love will grow even more with age
because in my heart you will always be
and that will Never change...

dedicated to Lauren Steven
my inspiration...you girl!!
PLZ VOTE !!!!!!!!!AND LEAVE COMMENTS AS IT MEANS SO MUCH TO ME AND IT ONLY TAKES A COUPLE OF SECONDS IF YOU CAN BE BOTHERED TO LOOK YOU CAN BE BOTHER TO VOTE LOL:p SO VOTE PLZZZZ

COPYRIGHTED SYNER..2oo6

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  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    I realllllly enjoyed this..it was so sweet and she rly islucky ot have a guy like you. Keep it up buddy.

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    Hi, it an't Amanda but I am MArtha.
    I coulden't find ur e-mails but ur a really good reiter. U should stick 2 it. I no how it feels when ur in luv and it's sweet thwe way u show it. Ur a very special boy. My name is LiLmA2FlOrIdA
    check me out.

  • 18 years ago

    by StormyWeather

    This is beautiful...
    your girl is one lucky woman :)
    you're so talented, you obviously love her a lot to notice all the little details...
    i hope you two stay together for a long time :)
    5/5

    abbi x

  • 18 years ago

    by obsessedgurl

    1st off thanx 4 ths comment, and second that poem was SO good and it didn't have all the steroetypical and overused crap in it.
    it was just so excellent and i love the tile best of all!

  • 18 years ago

    by Tammi

    Wow man I love this and she is one lucky girl to have u love her so much kep it up 5/5