Thank You

by Truly in Love   Jan 12, 2006


Dear,

So many years we've been together in this relation
It's a long train with no station

Trying to understand each other's core
Years have passed but there is always something new, something more

Never have I acknowledged your support in this way
What lies inside my heart, today I will say

When I first started walking on this path of love, laughs and happiness
I never understood the sorrows and stress

My mind would question as to why life always had a flip side
It made me afraid, made me hide

But you came, like an angel from heaven, to hold my hand
You pulled me off the dirty streets and helped me stand

From there began our life's most memorable story
You showed me how to love, how to smile, and how to burn in your glory

Through this life long adventure, I had a sense of anxiety, some flurries
Soon, I realized that you were always there to suffice my worries

I have come such a long way; on your shoulder resting my head
You were always my strength, helping me see the surprises coming ahead

As I find myself lost in your thoughts today
Let me just take the time to say~

You were the one who taught me things I never knew
So, as we continue on the roller coaster, let me simply thank you

Yours forever
and
For always,
Ipsita

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Excellent poem very nice flow and perfect wording loved it , it really touches home with me. :But you came, like an angel from heaven, to hold my hand
    You pulled me off the dirty streets and helped me stand
    I love your style keep writing and I'll keep reading , your friend tracy ~5/5 ~

  • 18 years ago

    by Monique

    Hey there,
    well this is a lovely piece of writing and I have nothing negative so say about it. You my dear, have talent. Keep on writing.
    Monique

  • 18 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Good one Ipsita!
    it's wonderful to have someone like that!
    nice work

  • 18 years ago

    by Sami

    I luffed your poem. =) -rates 5-

  • 18 years ago

    by rar

    This is a really good poem. i liked how it rhymed.