Comments : The Place Beyong The Clouds (Oasis)

  • 18 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    Beautifully done!

  • 18 years ago

    by JL

    Beautiful Nikki, I believe in heaven too, and hope to someday find it.
    Beyond Spacey Alliance
    Lies a Place Not Yet Defined
    a Place Scientist Deny
    But My Soul One Day Will Find
    I love it, it really grasps the whole point of the poem (in my opinion) I also love the ending, its nice to end on a positive note. *hugs* XXXXX
    JL

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Powerful and meaningful in a creative, relaxing way. Great use of words

  • 18 years ago

    by ThugPoet

    Excellent poem.. Loved it. =)

  • 18 years ago

    by Janice Brown~©~

    That is such akool poem yeh thats right go us christians

  • 18 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    This is really cute like a dream....5/5 i love it very good flow and everything

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Simply beatiful Nikki..... one day we will all find out what it's truly like.

  • 18 years ago

    by alyssa

    Beautiful poem, and one day you will find heaven, you have such a good heart.

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Wonderfully penned Nikki, lovely write!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by bluehun

    Nice write,i myself at the moment is looking for a higher power to over come alcohol,church is not what ive ever thouht of.i believe in life after death.so after reading this i shall try to find help from my local church.