Perpetum

by Leah20   Jan 13, 2006


It's like leaves falling from the trees
Skating on the mysteries
They'll never be solved
They'll never be claimed
Tell me dear soul,
Where shall I lay the blame
It's the only hope
It's the only life
In a wretched place as this
Tell me
Who has light
What is light?
The darkness seeping out
It's seeking me out
Tell me soul, oh soul of light
Where do we go when we die?

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  • 17 years ago

    by Dana

    Very intriguing....what is light? very good question....poems are the greatest when they make you think. Well done! This poem flowed quite well...and was just interesting!!! I loved it! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by AnnMarie

    Wow really good, good quetion and great way of putting it. Never would have thought of makeing one up like that.........awesome

    -ann
    -promise kept

    Ps I was in the disscussion forum!@!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Rusted x Heart

    I really like this poem, it really reflects the style all your poetry has. I love the way they are all so self-reflective, and theyre like a complex rhetorical question. I just loved the way you used you language and how effective it is in such a short and concise poem. it reads very well and very easily as well. Very well written!

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