Revolt of blood kin

by ReeneLou   Jan 13, 2006


Crimson blood running down your chin, lap it up know I\'ll never get it again, lying back dying within i don\'t understand what is happening, i may not die i may be mortal, but, is it worth the eternal torture?
the craving, the hunger, i bleed it flows it\'s leaving stains on my soul, but then again it clots up the hole you have left in my heart.
and as i look on in horror, you killed that girl without a trace of sorrow, the look on her face you exclaim was better than watching me die you say I\'m so lame,
the cravings, the hunger, the tears, the pain, she bleeds it flows it\'s leaving stains on my immortal soul, but then again it clots up the hole you ripped in my heart.
crying i beg, my knees they are weak, you just sit there and laugh tears roll down your cheeks, you think I\'m funny i scream flying into a rage pinning you down a stake in your ribcage, and, as i pound the hammer down it finds the heart you never thought you had.
the cravings, the hunger, the need, the pain, tears falling you sit there you bleed, it flows running down my front I\'ve plugged up the hole you ripped in my heart with your soul,
I\'m happy, i am, but i cry inside they take you away your dead, i did it they say tell me not to lie screaming i laugh I\'ve killed the ***** she is truly dead at last but,

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  • 17 years ago

    by xXsebastianXx

    Excellent verry good use of words i like how you showed so much anger and sadness its was really good keep up the good work.

    xXthe-bleeding-scars-of-sorrowXx AKA:Sebastian

  • 17 years ago

    by Roxy

    Wow this is your best one I LOVED ITTTTTT its so god damn good hun u put so much effort into this i can tell you used you pasion and feelings and i loved the way you wrote this poem your way of puting it into word is define xoxoryxox

  • 17 years ago

    by xXsebastianXx

    Wow this is awsome i really liked it keep up the good work

  • 18 years ago

    by Stabbylou

    Wow, this is so busy, but enjoyable, it's heated and frantic which gets the passion and emotion across here. i don't know, great work xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by ReeneLou

    This is the first poem i ever wrote my sister asked me to write her a poem to copy for school and until then i haddnt really been interested but now im'm hooked i write daily in my journal about everything and nothing so if you like my poems you'd better thank mara my little sis who by the way is a really good writer to look out for her soon

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