I hope your special friend read it. Because maybe they will know how much you mean to them alot. i hope everything is good. This was an amazing poem but very sad knowing that they left you feeling like this. keep it up though. keep on writing. love always and forever...your very talented.

I know this feeling too. it really sucks how only one person can change everything in your world but it amaing at the same time keep up the nice work i felt the pain

I liked this... it was really well written and i really really hope your friend will get to read this and i hope they know how much they obviously mean to you. nice job! 5/5

Dis poem is just excellent and i love it sooo much you know what??...u r very talented and u have a lot of feelings to say...keep up the great job...5/5

Wow, what can i say! this is so good. it has lots of emotion in it. keep up the good work.

Aw this is so sad but very good
i liked your style
great job.
Love Always
NErdyPants

Leaving is always something hard to deal with, especially if its someone you love more then anything leaving you. i think you will find that i can relate, in my poem, dear mom, but you dont have to read it. 5/5

Hey! Wow this poems is so great! So powerful and full of feeling! I really liked the lines:

"You leaving
is driving me to insanity
My world with out you
dark and gray"

Really well written! Keep up the awesome work! 5/5 =D
~Luvz~
~Angie~
xoxo

Aww i like this, alot of emotion. keep up the good work

Really good keep up the writing tell me when you have a new one

Nice poem! it obviousely has a lot of meaning, which is always good!
MMarr 5/5

It's painful and sad indeed.
The end is well-written.
I hope you aren't in such pain in real.

Great poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Way to go.. express yourself... but bby all means.. don't let him know he got you enslaved by his character..

I hope my comments do not offend your nor your friend..

Use what you got to get what you need... work that pencil and paper with your thoughts of your experiences.

love who you are, this helps in the hard times. be the center of attractions, just enough to avoid be selfishness. Enjoy life,live and learn...

Don't break my heart stay and keep me warm

I think it just runs a bit long. It's an okay poem for expressing how you feel, sure, but I think if you wanted more of a feeling go more in depth with the details. You don't have to. Just want to try helping :)

Hiya,

Feels exactly like how I feel..
Great poem, great read.

Cheers,
Laterz,
Shirlz.
♥

You are a talented writter.. i like your poems..nice job once again. 5/5

thanks for sharing
shannon