Wow..
Strong.
Very strong...
I'm not sure if its the fear of driving of the shock of this poem, but I can't breathe. I think its the second one because I was able to breathe when i started talking to you and you told me you wrote a poem, but now I can't.

I know you said its kinda about me, but the only character where I could POSSIBLY fit in is described as an angel. And I think if that's true, you're very wrong. VERY wrong....Angels are idols of mine. They're BEAUTIFUL in every way,...they're inspiring, and breathtaking. Why you would see ME as that.......i have no idea on earth. I've been hurting you right and left, unintentionally, but it doesn't matter, because that proves that I'm not perfect. I don't EXPECT you to be perfect either. You don't need to be perfect to ANYONE on this earth. The only thing I truly want out of you is something you've already given me, which I really don't deserve-your love. You shouldn't have to be this way over me or anyone....I know how it can feel. And I'm there for you WHENEVER and i'm NEVER going to leave you like Zac left me. No matter what.

Beautiful poem....kinda actually reverberates and makes me hate myself....i haven't been an angel to you, so why on earth would you see me that way???

-sigh-

Wonderful, dearest. Just...wonderful. XD

Wow nick..........wow....this is really good.....im speechless.....i know how you feel...i feel the same way towards a guy i know......im not perfect.....he knows i am not and i know hes not.....but we are goign to try and make this work....good job nick! love ya cutie!
Amanda

This is really good. I haven't been on this site in a while, but i see you haven't lost your touch...

TTUL,
girlii797

Hey that was really good!

Dang.....thats so simple but yet just wow. 5/5 on emotion alone lol I wish someone loved me this much :)

always keep writing, u've been in my favs for a while but I havent read anything by you for a really long time and I just started writing again so I guess ill have to keep up on things more if this is what ive been missing