Hey Gurl,
this is really awesome. im sum ways if we are thinking the same thing/way i can relate to this. so yeah it's reali beautiful. i love it. keep em' up love ya always,
**Ashleigh*Sue**

I like that one.....Nice job....really good..love your words too
5/5
ttyl sometime
PeAcE
~The Poet~

This poem was very powerful, emotional and passionate. The only problem I found was that it was kind of all over the place with it's length so it was hard to follow in some places, and got confusing in others. Maybe you could brake the poem up into smaller poems and then elaborate on those? I don't know, it's just a thought.

-Tainted Mikochan